splashing in
shoving off
all these things
we love:
tree
car
boat
–
shoving off
swimming in
all these things
we love:
sun
bird
turtle
–
take me in
take me in
heat stroke saps
my strength
–
splash me off
and shove me
in
water saves
my life
–
all these things
we love:
tree bird boat
sun car turtle
all these things
we love!
1/9/15
pik
To: Amie
©Patti Keno
the inspiration for this one came from a pontoon boat ride at my sister’s new house on the Portage Lake chain.
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Again, the techniques such as the rhythm you use make your poems very enjoyable!
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Just life like!
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