Invisible No More

my love affair with words

the lake

on January 9, 2015


splashing in

shoving off

all these things

we love:




shoving off

swimming in

all these things

we love:




take me in

take me in

heat stroke saps

my strength

splash me off

and shove me


water saves

my life

all these things

we love:

tree bird boat

sun car turtle

all these things

we love!



To: Amie

 ©Patti Keno

3 responses to “the lake

  1. pattikeno says:

    the inspiration for this one came from a pontoon boat ride at my sister’s new house on the Portage Lake chain.


  2. queryjoy says:

    Again, the techniques such as the rhythm you use make your poems very enjoyable!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Harbans says:

    Just life like!

    Liked by 1 person

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